Comments for Marc's Blog http://15chenm.edublogs.org Another excellent Edublogs.org weblog Mon, 02 Nov 2009 02:31:07 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 Comment on HEART dissection by 15chenm http://15chenm.edublogs.org/2009/11/01/heart-dissection/comment-page-1/#comment-23 15chenm Mon, 02 Nov 2009 02:31:07 +0000 http://15chenm.edublogs.org/?p=50#comment-23 aa aa

]]> Comment on My Story by 15parkj http://15chenm.edublogs.org/2009/03/17/my-story/comment-page-1/#comment-22 15parkj Wed, 18 Mar 2009 02:30:23 +0000 http://15chenm.edublogs.org/?p=39#comment-22 This story was good and funny but you should have describe more about your character and the setting was. This story was good and funny but you should have describe more about your character and the setting was.

]]> Comment on Sum 41 Concert by rika http://15chenm.edublogs.org/2009/03/15/sum-41-concert/comment-page-1/#comment-21 rika Mon, 16 Mar 2009 14:32:45 +0000 http://15chenm.edublogs.org/?p=38#comment-21 so do u like greenday, flumpool, or sum41? Anyways, you are so lucky u get to go to a live concert. so do u like greenday, flumpool, or sum41? Anyways, you are so lucky u get to go to a live concert.

]]> Comment on Hatchet Book by 15sakurah http://15chenm.edublogs.org/2008/10/16/hatchet-book/comment-page-1/#comment-20 15sakurah Sun, 01 Mar 2009 05:39:42 +0000 http://15chenm.edublogs.org/?p=8#comment-20 It really was fun but I didn't get what happened in the last part. It really was fun but I didn’t get what happened in the last part.

]]> Comment on comic strip by 15parkj http://15chenm.edublogs.org/2009/01/28/test/comment-page-1/#comment-19 15parkj Fri, 30 Jan 2009 00:49:45 +0000 http://15chenm.edublogs.org/?p=33#comment-19 Marc, you explained very well about website but still you should work on capital letters. Marc, you explained very well about website but still you should work on capital letters.

]]> Comment on The Movie I watched during my winter break by 15sakurah http://15chenm.edublogs.org/2009/01/06/movie-i-watched-during-the-winter-break/comment-page-1/#comment-17 15sakurah Wed, 14 Jan 2009 09:39:54 +0000 http://15chenm.edublogs.org/?p=21#comment-17 Bruce lee is a really good actor. Bruce lee is a really good actor.

]]> Comment on The Movie I watched during my winter break by Colin Campbell http://15chenm.edublogs.org/2009/01/06/movie-i-watched-during-the-winter-break/comment-page-1/#comment-16 Colin Campbell Mon, 12 Jan 2009 21:49:06 +0000 http://15chenm.edublogs.org/?p=21#comment-16 Marc, Some good, well expressed opinions about this film. Your language is generally accurate but structure your blog posts more carefully. With a bit more planning you could have thought of more aspects of the film to write about. This might also have helped you analyse the story a bit more. 'Enter the Dragon' is an action film but that does not mean there is not a story and also a theme that the director was trying to develop. However, as you point out, this film is all about Bruce Lee. Perhaps just more detailed description of what made him such an effective action hero would improve it. Keep blogging....Mr C Marc,

Some good, well expressed opinions about this film. Your language is generally accurate but structure your blog posts more carefully. With a bit more planning you could have thought of more aspects of the film to write about. This might also have helped you analyse the story a bit more. ‘Enter the Dragon’ is an action film but that does not mean there is not a story and also a theme that the director was trying to develop. However, as you point out, this film is all about Bruce Lee. Perhaps just more detailed description of what made him such an effective action hero would improve it. Keep blogging….Mr C

]]> Comment on The Movie I watched during my winter break by 15whitinga http://15chenm.edublogs.org/2009/01/06/movie-i-watched-during-the-winter-break/comment-page-1/#comment-15 15whitinga Fri, 09 Jan 2009 01:31:53 +0000 http://15chenm.edublogs.org/?p=21#comment-15 Hello, You did offer your opinion which is a good thing but you should give more information. From Alec and Jae Hyun Hello,
You did offer your opinion which is a good thing but you should give more information.

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]]> Comment on Roald Dahl poster by 15reynoldsh http://15chenm.edublogs.org/2008/11/18/roald-dahl-poster/comment-page-1/#comment-9 15reynoldsh Mon, 24 Nov 2008 12:47:10 +0000 http://15chenm.edublogs.org/?p=14#comment-9 it was really hard. in are group we had people doing nothing. we need more help to make it perfecto. it was really hard. in are group we had people doing nothing. we need more help to make it perfecto.

]]> Comment on Roald Dahl poster by 15manjit http://15chenm.edublogs.org/2008/11/18/roald-dahl-poster/comment-page-1/#comment-8 15manjit Mon, 24 Nov 2008 12:35:24 +0000 http://15chenm.edublogs.org/?p=14#comment-8 Ya, it was a hard task! Ya, it was a hard task!

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